YOUR HOBBY WEBSITE
Caitlin:
You need to cut your Statement of Intent down to 300 words as I cannot ft it into the interactive pdf that the exam board supplies at the moment. Please replace it on your blog here so I know where to look.
Next, the video of the young artist shows her turning her eyes away from the audience as if she is reading from a script. This isn’t how a real interview (‘media language’) would look. Is there anything that you can do to change this element? It might mean re-shooting the artist and having her answer spontaneously, or just having the Q & A as a voiceover while the camera shows paintings.
Max K:
Try to write the article: it goes with the film interview. About 150-200 words. See what other people have written.
Jess N: Put something on the website to lead the moderator to your video.
Jackson:
Your coursework is a hobby website for teens. In your Statement of Intent, you write:
In this article, I will be filming Tom Wilson and Alex Histon. Both of these young stars play for academy and both have the potential to reach Smith Rowe's footsteps. I will be filming these at Claremont by the football pitch. This will be filmed in a scenic manner, which will hopefully inspire young footballers. I will also be using editing to make this more inspiring and dramatic.
From your website:
“Here you can see a humble interview from Emile Smith-Rowe which shows how you can become and breakthrough just like him.”
However, I cannot see the re-shot interview : all I can see is a football match with a lot of wind sound.
We had agreed that you would re-shoot the interview somewhere without background noise.
I also suggested making the website title THE NEXT STEP a bit more eye-catching (so, bigger and more legible)
Jack: Complete the Statement of Intent properly
Tabbi: Where on your home page does one click to open the video? I cannot tell and therefore the moderator won’t be able to. Please fix this.
Grace:
You emailed me on 8 February saying that you were at home trying to upload your video.See IT and please sort this out.
Laurence:
- The main video is a bit difficult to open.
- There should be an article of about 150-200 words on a linked page (that the moderator clicks to open)
YOUR EXAM
Today revise from The Avengers : media representations
